I started re-editing my first book and managed to get the prologue worked out and two pages of the first chapter. Most people would think that this would be nothing. However, I had to add a prologue to set the story up properly. The first chapter really needed a good hook. My first three chapters introduce the three main characters, a chapter for each. From there we get into the meat and potatoes of the story.
Premise: Three teens working on community service hours for school find themselves in the Twin Towers on 9/11 where they are forced to face their past if they are to survive the present.
Please respond and tell me what you think of this premise?